Go Ahead Laugh....A Poem

Does exactly what it says on the tin. Some of the nonsense contained herein may be very loosely related to The Sisters of Mercy, but I wouldn't bet your PayPal account on it. In keeping with the internet's general theme nothing written here should be taken as Gospel: over three quarters of it is utter gibberish, and most of the forum's denizens haven't spoken to another human being face-to-face for decades. Don't worry your pretty little heads about it. Above all else, remember this: You don't have to stay forever. I will understand.
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Black Planet
Andrew's Love Goddess
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Or just a small bit of BP..you take a guess..Yeah,...from Cultweb where I debut all my poems...but now here at Heartland.

A Poem...


Of Me

Today I found my heart
Yesterday I lost my mind
Life was only there to find
A little piece or part of me

Something for all to see
But nothing there yet to be
Only little particles of me

Floating softly in the air
Drifting here, and there...everywhere
Wanting needing someone to care
Of what is left of me

A smile a laugh
A cry a wail
A back so strong it will not break
Waiting for someone to take
A little part of me

Hope faith love eternal
Fires my flame
But embers burn
Hot smoldering
Always and forever
There shall be love inside of me

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ryan
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i like it..it seems to be about love, and not death

and if theres one thing i hate, its depressing poems. This ones nice :)
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Almiche V
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It also reads like you've found some inner strength.
To not know and to ask a question is a moment of embarrassment; to not know and not ask is a lifetime of shame.
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Loki
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@ BP - Be a good girl and take your medication. :von:
Loki was never worshiped as the other Gods,
Which is quite understandable.
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James Blast
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Hmmmm, nice BeeP
"And when you start to think about death, you start to think about what's after it. And then you start hoping there is a God. For me, it's a frightening thought to go nowhere".
~ Peter Steele
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Big Si
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Thanks for that! :notworthy:

(buggering off right now Sir!)
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Erudite
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It works for me.
You are what you drink - I'm a bitter man!
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Black Planet
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I'm not much for writing about blue skies and flowers....

Nice new avatar, Big Si. Bill Murray is one of my favorites!
ryan
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lost in translation was a good movie imo

nice to hear a JAMC song at the end :D
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Poetry! :notworthy:

The world needs more poets.
The fundamental cause of the trouble is that in the modern world the stupid are cocksure while the intelligent are full of doubt.
—Bertrand Russell
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