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Re: SHE'S A MONSTER

Posted: 08 Nov 2022, 10:28
by Fodderstompf
Two small additions:

stop the bleeding arms and grease [stop the beating hearts and grieve?]
and try for peace [a dry release?] :eek:
here, your talking from us [could be talking, could be chalking, probably carambolage]
see that car hit a sidewalk,
and I know I've seen it

Uh oh, uh oh, uh oh stop talking!
uh oh, uh oh, uh oh, stop talking over...
she's a monster and it's cold out there [[she's a monster ... despair]]
queen of city I am there

queen of city I am there
oh, stop talking, stop talking
it will be fashion
that marks the flesh [wicked couple lines, probably something else though]
-> [[A love that's lost - time to end it!]] <-

Uh oh, uh oh, uh oh stop talking!
uh oh, uh oh, uh oh, stop talking over...
she's a monster and it's cold out there [[she's a monster ... despair]]
queen of city I am there
Queen of city I am there

Re: SHE'S A MONSTER

Posted: 08 Nov 2022, 11:47
by Dr. Moody
Possibly?

Stop the bleeding arms
and please try for peace
hear, your talk across
see that car hit a sidewalk,
and I know I'm sleeping

Re: SHE'S A MONSTER

Posted: 05 Jan 2023, 10:40
by alanm
ChatGPT has this take:

> Write the lyrics to a song called "She's A Monster" in the style of The Sisters Of Mercy
ChatGPT wrote:Verse 1:
She's got a look in her eye
That cuts like a knife
She's got a heart of stone
And she'll leave you behind

Chorus:
She's a monster, she's a monster
Watch out, she'll tear you apart
She's a monster, she's a monster
Beware, she's breaking your heart

Verse 2:
She's got a tongue like a lash
And she'll make you bleed
She's got a touch like a venom
You'll be begging on your knees

Chorus:
She's a monster, she's a monster
Watch out, she'll tear you apart
She's a monster, she's a monster
Beware, she's breaking your heart

Bridge:
She's got a hold on you now
You can't escape her grasp
She'll pull you in and then
She'll let you crash

Chorus:
She's a monster, she's a monster
Watch out, she'll tear you apart
She's a monster, she's a monster
Beware, she's breaking your heart
Sounds more Hussey than Eldritch to me.

Re: SHE'S A MONSTER

Posted: 05 Jan 2023, 15:13
by markfiend
Sounds like Hall & Oates "Maneater" to me :lol:

Re: SHE'S A MONSTER

Posted: 22 Aug 2023, 16:28
by LyanvisAberrant
Stop the beat, add on some grease and drive your beast (!?!?!?)

Uh oh, stop talking
She's a monster, and it's cold out there
Queen of city, i am heir

Just a few lines that occured to me x

Re: SHE'S A MONSTER

Posted: 22 Aug 2023, 18:03
by LyanvisAberrant
2nd line: "And... Hear/here... Your [talk and/talking] promise"

What i had previously made no sense. This sounds more likely, to me at least.