Sweet Aurora: Nice tune, vocals are really good, I think, but the refrain has too much lyrics in my opinion. The vocalist is just rattling away to fit it all in... Ditch some words, keep it concise. Also, vocals and bass are out of sync sometimes on the refrain, which gives it a muddy and unprofessional sound. The thing that really annoys me after a couple of seconds is the clipping sound and the drum presets we all heard a gazillion times before. Ditch the Doctor, go for your own refreshing drum sound.
Snow to Settle: The same problems with distorted sound and clipping, and too much words crammed in which makes it sound a bit Hiphop, as Motz said before... There is also a weird delay (on the bass I think) somewhere which does not sync with the drum rhythm. Otherwise a nice song, even a bit too short.
Corridor: Starts like 'Emma', apparently
Piano-sound is also out of sync, consider recording all the stuff with a MIDI-track, so you can sync more easily. Again (and not for the last time I fear) the clipping makes me want to skip it after a few seconds... Which is a shame, coz it could sound very nice I think...
Body Electric: Ain't this song originally from a certain well-known band?
Nice cover, same problems with sound of course, what I really liked is the additional notes on the strophes which makes the chords fuller, although the synths play a couple of 'wrong' notes IMO
Very good voice, loved the dual vocals too... Nice!
Seven Nails: same prob as Snow to Settle: too much words on the strophes, clipping sound...
We are the same Suzanne: the reason why you have to work with MIDI: the piano bassnotes in the beginning are out of tempo... love the thunderclap in the beginning, also the lead piano sound is very nice... Vocals are very good, nice delay too, although I would only use it on some words ('We are the same' only, for example).
Overall: a nice effort overshadowed by a crappy production, which is such a pity. I should consider working with someone who knows how to record (there are some people here on this forum, or so I heard
). The vocals are really good, singer has a nice voice, only try to spread the words as I said. Sometimes more is said with less words and it has more impact sometimes when you use only a few well-placed sentences instead of a rattle of words. That's for people like Sir Mix-a-Lot and Anthrax
I heard a lot of lovely stuff here from our youngsters, the only thing they always lack (without much exceptions really) is the productional side of the thing. Not that my productions are state-of-the-art, but always remember a good song or album stands or falls with a decent production and mastering, be it a first attempt at a demo CD or a tenth professional album. Clipping and distortion can be easily avoided by watching your track levels and overall master levels. Please do so. Louder ain't always better. It's better to use compression to give your songs that 'pump' instead of thinking that +6 decibel is better for your sound. It isn't
Best of luck, to ALL of our young and new projects!
IZ.