'First + Last + Always' on Wikipedia

[Fodderstompf]

Folks, I translated my German article into English (sort of):

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/First_and_Last_and_Always

Could somebody who's a native speaker off ze English
language look over it, as my English is sort of vooden...

Apart from that I find it quite good - apparently.

[Being645]

cool, Fodderstompf ... ...

However, I'm not English, either, so I leave it to others to make suggestions for improvement ...

just two short hints at first sight ...

1. ... which were released on the band's own indie label Merciful Release

I'd suggest a link there, either to that Wiki's Merciful-Release page or to the one in the Sisters Wiki ...


2. You forgot to delete a German word here in the third passage: ... and finally signed a satisfactory contract with WEA Records ab.

however, a great job, anyway ... ... ...