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Go Ahead Laugh....A Poem

Posted: 24 Jan 2004, 05:23
by Black Planet
Or just a small bit of BP..you take a guess..Yeah,...from Cultweb where I debut all my poems...but now here at Heartland.

A Poem...


Of Me

Today I found my heart
Yesterday I lost my mind
Life was only there to find
A little piece or part of me

Something for all to see
But nothing there yet to be
Only little particles of me

Floating softly in the air
Drifting here, and there...everywhere
Wanting needing someone to care
Of what is left of me

A smile a laugh
A cry a wail
A back so strong it will not break
Waiting for someone to take
A little part of me

Hope faith love eternal
Fires my flame
But embers burn
Hot smoldering
Always and forever
There shall be love inside of me

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Posted: 24 Jan 2004, 15:25
by ryan
i like it..it seems to be about love, and not death

and if theres one thing i hate, its depressing poems. This ones nice :)

Posted: 24 Jan 2004, 15:38
by Almiche V
It also reads like you've found some inner strength.

Posted: 24 Jan 2004, 20:11
by Loki
@ BP - Be a good girl and take your medication. :von:

Posted: 25 Jan 2004, 02:42
by James Blast
Hmmmm, nice BeeP

Posted: 25 Jan 2004, 02:44
by Big Si
Thanks for that! :notworthy:

(buggering off right now Sir!)

Posted: 25 Jan 2004, 12:20
by Erudite
It works for me.

Posted: 25 Jan 2004, 14:14
by Black Planet
I'm not much for writing about blue skies and flowers....

Nice new avatar, Big Si. Bill Murray is one of my favorites!

Posted: 25 Jan 2004, 15:08
by ryan
lost in translation was a good movie imo

nice to hear a JAMC song at the end :D

Posted: 26 Jan 2004, 11:42
by markfiend
Poetry! :notworthy:

The world needs more poets.